Friday, February 02, 2007

The Dance

As I drove along a busy road yesterday, I got stuck in a traffic jam, and I witnessed a couple clearly in love, and it really moved me. It felt like new love... they danced with each other in every movement and an energy moved between them. It was so heart warming to see them, brought my attention back to an experience beyond the mundanity which life can sometimes become. It was just love between two people, romantic love.

Dragging her hands along the iron railings
which lined the river's bank,
she felt him brush close, a feather touch, then move away in the rhythm of his walk.
Consumed by it the noise of the cars beside them drowned out,
as they danced their endless dance in their duality,
interweaving amongst the changing lines of the road,
tailing, leading, tailing, leading, synchronising in rare moments,
not daring to look sideways.

And so with eyes focused away from him,
her whole soul in fact watched only him, a sightless vision,
blinded to the immediate watery landscape
where two swans glided effortlessly down the lifeless water,
heads bowed, moving in tandem,
their soft tranquility uninterrupted by their desolate surroundings.

Another brush, words without sound filled her senses,
and with a shy laugh his hand sought hers and she took it,
feeling tension flow away through him and out.
Cars inched along beside them, a man shot a passing glance at her
and then moved on, his destination once more becoming his reality.

Slowing, she looked at him, eyes soft, unsure, becoming stiller.
Her question returned and needing to know, submitting to the pull,
he took her neck in one hand, followed by the other,
And drew her in.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

A very romantic, moving poem. If only these moments could be prolonged, remaining untouchable to changing surroundings. Improbable, but a wish worth hoping for.

Loved it - as expected. Keep it up.

Jon said...

I love this, and I love that you revealed the circumstances that inspired it.

This line alone paints and interprets the lovers' dance so well:
"tailing, leading, tailing, leading, synchronising in rare moments"

And I liked the way that:
"a man shot a passing glance at her / and then moved on, his destination once more becoming his reality" so clearly demonstrated how our realities are in constant flux and are shaped in the tension between our desires and the world's demands on us.

Really, really nice.

Crafty Green Poet said...

This is so beautiful, gently romantic, especially the watching without watching...

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